M. B. Weston’s Writing Diary: 01/08/15

Left off last night with my hero and his new sidekick chasing a villain through the streets of New Orleans.

The problem: they have to find the villain.

This means I have to find the villain.

And this guy is all squirrelly, and squirrelly villain’s annoy me. They always slip away during all the intense scenes and I can’t find them. I guarantee you that’s why Picante in The Elysian Chronicles is still alive. I can’t ever find the guy… He runs away like the coward he is…

That is always the problem with writing. You have to be as smart as your hero and at least on step ahead of your villain. Sigh… (I even put this guy in a bright coat, and he just threw it off during the chase…)

So tonight was writing the framework for some of the chase scenes and putting down of the dialog I’ve had in my head on paper (digitally speaking, of course). I have to get to know these two characters and writing is the only way I can do that.

Of course, the whole night ended with the villain escaping, which was sad for them but it definitely keeps the story rolling. Tension turns pages. ๐Ÿ™‚

All right all. My bed is calling my name. And I’ve already fallen asleep a few times in the past 20 minutes.

Before I go, what are you all writing? Have any of you had to play “find your villain” while creating a story?

Toodles!

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M. B. Weston’s Writing Diary: 01/07/15

Going out on weeknights is a death sentence for any working writer who wants to keep the story’s momentum going. By the time you get home and walk the dog, it’s already 10:00 or 11:00 depending… Writers who work full time already know this fun tidbit, but oftentimes friends and family of writers might not fully grasp it–especially for those who might be trying to write for the first time. (If you happen to be a friend or family member of a writer and watch his or her skull break open only to reveal a reptilian monster with red laser eyes aiming a death ray at you when you merely mention going out on a week night, cut the poor dear some slack…)

Anywho, last night, I finally started writing around 11:45. I felt like the muse was reclining on the couch next to me, inspecting her nails, saying, “Honey, you’re on your own. I’m done for the night.”

I worked out a few major plot points in the opening scene, mainly regarding the immortality status of my villain (ah, the joys of writing fantasy), and finally my hero, Michael, and his brand new sidekick were finally ready to chase the villain through the streets of New Orleans.

That’s when I encountered a slight problem: my villain got a head start. I had no idea where he was… (Ah, the joys of writing urban fantasy…)

I don’t know what happened next, but I woke up at 1:39am…

The imagined conversation between me and the muse as I hobbled to bed:

Muse (still inspecting her nails): Told ya.

Me: Oh shut up…

This is why writers who also work full time have conniptions when they have to go out more than once a weeknight…

(It’s also why I wrote this post between putting on my makeup and while I was walking to work.)

Toodles!

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M. B. Weston’s Writing Diary: 01/06/15

As I write this, my eyes are fighting to stay open. I should have known that my writing is kind of like Cinderella’s coach. No matter how beautiful and glitzy it is, and no matter what kind of amazing ideas are inside of it… Yeah, my writing basically turns into a pumpkin after midnight.

And yet, somehow, I keep finding myself trying to push the boundaries just a bit more.

#headdesk

Why do I do this to myself? I know–I know–that when I have to edit this massive amount of slush, I’m going to be doing double the work just to make it readable…

And yet, I keep thinking, “Just one more paragraph.”

(It would help if my characters would take a little breather. If they would just sleep, I could too.)

Anywho, enough rambling. Today was productive. I finished up several administrative things (like bills), and I finally plowed through this first scene, where I feel like I’ve been stuck for days because I can’t get it right. (Figuring out that I was writing the wrong book didn’t help, either…) But I’m through the scene. My characters have met and they are off hunting the bad guy through the streets of New Orleans. Oh yeah, and some coroner almost had a little accident when what was supposed to be a dead body sat up all Michael Myers style.

:::evil grin:::

Hey, if I’m gonna be up late writing, I’m going to have some fun with it.

Tomorrow, I gotta figure out the next scene and keep it all going. Here’s to a full week of fulfilling my New Year’s Resolution to write every day!

Drop me a line and let me know what projects you’re working on!

Toodles!

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M.B. Weston’s Writing Diary: 01/05/15

Seriously, why does the story have to unfold itself, complete with good dialogue, while I’ve only got 5 minutes to get to work?!?

Why can’t it unfold itself while I’m drinking a steaming cup of Earl Grey tea and staring at my computer screen waiting for stupid inspiration to strike?!?

Obviously inspiration likes seeing me panic while I try to simultaneously apply eyeshadow with one hand and jot down notes with the other. And no, I’m not ambidextrous, so you can imagine how that turned out.

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I think my muse lives in the hot water heater and only shows up when I’m in the shower.

On a good note, this grand “writing everyday experiment” is proving fruitful. Inspiration is flowing! Now if I can just get it to flow while I’m at the computer…

Of course, that was before work. Once I left work, I came home and had to record tonight’s Final Cut in Movies Radio Show. Then out to eat. Got back around 8:45, walked dog, answered some email, looked over copy for Dark Oak Press… Once again, I’m now trying to meet my “write something today” quota after hours…

Thank goodness I’m a night owl. And thank goodness the iPhone has an MS Word app… One of the first times I’ve written something almost half asleep… We’ll see if it’s a recognizable language tomorrow afternoon.

Lesson: always have a notebook handy ๐Ÿ™‚

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Toodles!

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M. B. Weston’s Writing Diary: 01/04/15

I’m going to be short because it’s already 3:22 tomorrow and I have to get to work.

So I’m not going to delve into detail about the how long it took me to pack up all the Christmas decorations, or put the pantry back together when one of the shelves fell down after I added more groceries to it. Nor will I talk about how I remembered I had to record my radio show while I was walking the dog around 9;45 tonight. And I certainly won’t complain about the “revamped” website I always use for research not working as well…

Nope. Won’t do that.

Instead… Today was one of those days. I finished researching for my radio show around 2:45am and took a nice hot shower. I really wanted to go to bed–especially since I hadn’t sat down all day.

But I made my new year’s resolution about writing every day this year, and I’m going to do it.

I also have a handy little iPhone with a Microsoft Word app on it. So I went out to the living room and started typing in the dark. I solved a major problem with the first scene as well!

But now I’m falling asleep mid-sentence so it’s time to call it a night.

Two lessons learned today:
1) the iPhone app is awesome!
2) all writers need servants….

All right, I’m off to bed before I accidentally type something I shouldn’t.

Toodles!

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M. B. Weston’s Writing Diary: 01/03/15

Laundry is the death of all good writing days.

Let me explain: Writing is all about getting in “the Zone.” The Zone is where all amazing stories happen. It’s basically a time when you focus everything out and creativity, story, and characters just blend together and make something happen. The Zone is where all good dialog hides and where all the things you never knew about the story show themselves.

The Zone is a very difficult place to get to. On average, it takes me at least fifteen minutes of staring at my computer and pretending to type words to get into the Zone. And then, it doesn’t really have any benefit unless I spend at least 45 minutes there. When I’m there, I’m there. I can’t really hear anything going on around me. I’m concentrating fully on the story I see unfolding in my mind. And yes, it’s easy to startle me when I’m in the zone.

Interruptions in the Zone can kill a story. I have lost countless amounts of dialog and storyline because of interruptions.

The other problem: interruptions take you out of the zone. And it takes at least 15 minutes to get back into the zone. They are costly.

We writers try to be polite, but one interruption can cost us an hour of time and the desperation of trying to re-figure out the story.

And today was laundry day… Every hour, a new load. No Zone…

I got to it after dinner though. ๐Ÿ™‚ It wasn’t perfect, but the story is taking shape. I took about 1,300 words for them other novella I thought was the first and put them inn and then added to that. I’m at over 3,000.

Tomorrow will be an interruption free day–I hope ๐Ÿ™‚

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M. B. Weston’s Writing Diary: 01/02/15

My new year’s resolution: write every day. This sounds easier than it is. When you work full time and you come home on Friday, there are a few things you don’t want to do: 1) use your brain, 2) answer emails, 3) use your brain, 4) straighten the house, 5) use your brain, 6) figure out how on earth you’re going to get the rough draft of a novella done in two weeks.. Especially since that takes… your brain.

Seriously, on the last day of the work week, I’m toast.

But I have deadlines to meet, a resolution to keep, and goals to make happen.

And I swear, watching Indiana Jones and the Last Crusade is part of meeting those goals. Seriously. Scouts honor. It’s pulp, and I was told to watch it. ๐Ÿ™‚

Anyway, so… Most of my “writing” took place in the form of plotting in the shower. (Take that in the innocent spirit in which it was written.) I have to redo the concept for this first novella, and that involves some thought. So I worked out a bit of the introduction, making sure to introduce the main characters in the series to each other. I’m also coming closer to figuring out the main plot. Since my main character’s nemesis has the power to see anything in a reflection, I want to play around with the idea of smoke and mirrors… It’s going to come to me tomorrow because I’m not going to give it a choice.

Anyway, I wrote all of my ideas down directly into the manuscript, and I have therefore written today.

And if you are a writer or thinking about becoming a writer, here is a hint: you can now download Microsoft Word on your iPhone/iPad and connect it to your dropbox. So I can type a few paragraphs before I get to bed and I don’t have to wait for the computer to turn on, which is wonderful!

All right. Off to bed now! Tomorrow I want to get 7,000 words done if possible…

Toodles!

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M. B. Weston’s Writing Diary: 01/01/15

So this morning, I realized that I’m writing the wrong story in this little novella series first.

That’s right. I started writing the wrong story.

Yeah, that was a great revelation… I just spent 3 days working on what is actually going to be the second story in the Michael Lodestone series, only I’m a story ahead.

Actually, without going into any spoiler detail… I basically, in 15 minutes while I was taking my morning shower, figured out the entire plot of the novella series. Well, the big picture story arc. I spent the rest of the day researching in the Internet and brainstorming. It sounds like wasted time, but now I know where I’m going with this thing.

(I also know the properties of Jade and where you can find it, and I have a nice list of mythological creatures with fangs or tusks… And I now know that a few Chinese emperors were killed drinking what they thought were elixirs of life… Yep, the research took me in an interesting direction.)

Right before I went to bed, I wrote down a whole scene of dialogue between two characters, so I even got to write some today. ๐Ÿ™‚

Lesson: sometimes, figuring out that you have to start a different story can be the best thing for the series.

New goal: Finish rough draft by January 24th.

And now I am off to bed. Toodles!

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M. B. Weston’s Writing Diary: 12/31/14

Today was quite interesting. Nothing like walking to work and having 20 ideas about your current writing project race through your head. I love it when that happens; it means I’m in the writing zone all the time–not just when I’m at the desk. It means my work will become more productive. It takes a few days to get there, but once I’m there, no matter where I am or what I do, I get ideas. (This is why successful writers suggest writing every day, and it’s probably why I haven’t been able to get a good flow going for a while. Losing this momentum with a few days break takes a weak to get back. I’m going to make it a goal to do something with writing–books, not blogs–every day for 2015.)

Anyway, figured out three scenes that need changing in my first paragraph. I’m going to jot notes in the prose and come back to it later when I have a better feel for the characters and where the story is going. It will look something like this:

Michael stumbled down the street, blood dripping off his jacket. [Note: the cops took his knife and he has to go back and get it.]

Came home from work early. Cleaned the house and then had to go to the vet to get special prescription food for my dog, who has a bladder stone problem. Finally backย at desk around 5:00. Now its time to stare this manuscript in the face and start writing even though–let’s be honest–trying to formulate a lot of these action scenes is really frustrating. I hate writing stage directions and choreography, and that’s basically the gist of action scenes. Later I will get to fill in the blanks, like sensory details and character development, but right now… It’s like wading throughย mud. But my characters are still trapped in a sinking van, and I have to get them out. Oh, and add in a little surprise with one of the characters. :::grin grin:::

Got about 1000 words in and then had to leave for a New Year’s Eve party.

Toodles!

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M. B. Weston’s writing Diary: 12/30/14

Wow, what a day. Worked, came home, spent just a bit of time working on getting end of year bills paid but not enough. Then left to have dinner with my sister and her husband. Came back, finished bills, walked the dog… By then, it was 11:20… I’m really trying to write every day no matter what in 2015, so I set my timer for 15 minutes and…

Well basically I sank a van in the Mississippi River and then had to leave the passengers in the van as it filled with water because my timer went off.

:::insert maniacal smile here::::

A few things I learned tonight:

Claire doesn’t want to be called Claire. I keep calling her a variety of names, but mainly Currently Mary, Kate, and Judith hopped in there once. If she keeps it up, I’m going to call her Meredith Weathersby and turn her hair grey and tie it in a tight old lady bun.

Of course, I just destroyed the vehicle my good guys need to complete their assignment… Like seriously. But, think of the conflict I just created! I love writing characters into corners because getting them out is half the fun.

I just realized that 30,000 words is four 8,000 word short stories. This is key because I divide my stories into 4ths (like a screenplay).

Writing action scenes (like, having a van fall in a river and sink) is much harder than character development scenes. seriously, it’s so much easier to have your character sit on a couch and ponder. I’ve encountered a few times in this story where I have wanted to move on an idea and really had to convince myself to do it because writing the scene would be hard. I think part of it is figuring out how my character will solve the problem.

Forcing myself to put something “on paper” (digitally speaking) each day and blog about my progress is working. I’m really excited about this. I want at least 3 books to come out this year…

Okay, folks, time for bed. I’m looking at 6 or less hours of sleep.

Toodles!

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