M. B. Weston’s Writing Diary: 12/29/14

Hard day today. Woke up at 3:45am because I never took a shower or removed my make-up last night. Set alarm for 6:00 so I could start jogging again, but kind of slept through it. Woke up (again) at 8:07am, giving me exactly 8 minutes to get ready for work. Got home around 4:30, answered email, balanced bank, did bills, left again for dinner.

Finally back at desk at 8:11. Brainstormed for a bit. Figured out:

  1. The end-game for the series. (Oh yes!!!)
  2. The beginning (Someone dies, which kinda happens a lot in my books.
  3. I feel the “Ah Ha Moment” approaching… I also fear I’m going to have to get hold of someone familiar with shipping in NOLA…

8:44: took quick break to walk Chewie, my doggie. (Will let a few ideas simmer and see what I come up with.)

10:10 Back at desk after a bit of dog walking and thinking things through. My main character, Michael Lodestone has to intercept a shipment. I don’t know what the heck is in the shipments somewhere in New Orleans, and I might not even know until he actually reaches it, but its enough to go on. I also know his team consists of a female ex-cop with a prosthetic leg below the knee and a male computer hacker. Their names will come to me later. (I suspect the girl’s name is Claire, but I’ve heard far too much Modern Family going on in the television in the family room.) And one of them has to have blond hair because I’ve got a bunch of brunettes running around. (Ah, the joys of being a pantser.) (And don’t think I’ve given away anything because I haven’t…)

On now to the story!

Goal: 1,500 words. In 45 minutes. The quality of said words isn’t really important right now. If I do 1,500 words per night for 13 to 14 chapters, my rough ROUGH draft is done in two weeks. Having the story in my head would greatly increase the chances of this happening, but I can only work with what I’ve got, which is bits and pieces of a puzzle right now.

11:30 Fell asleep at the desk. Got about 1000 words in and figured that if I fell asleep sitting up, it might be time to turn it in. Something I’ve learned about writing: once you’re done, your done. Staying up an extra hour will only produce crud, meaning you’ve got a pile of nasty words you can’t do anything with and 1 hour less sleep. (In my case, I also seem to get sick.)

Tomorrow looks good because I get to sink a van full of people and figure out how to get them out alive! 🙂

Toodles!

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M. B. Weston’s Writing Diary: 12/28/14

I’ve decided to keep a little online writing diary to keep myself accountable for my writing. Nothing like a little bit of public pressure to kick myself into high gear… I’ve also got a few major writing goals for this year and a few publishers asking me for stories and I thought it would be fun to share what is in the cue. This is my first entry, and I’m typing it on my iPhone in bed right before I go to sleep–for the second time, so expect entries to change over time.

Project: 30,000 word pulp novella due to Pro Se Publishing by April 15, 2014. (This was a fluke project that comes under the heading of: mention an idea to Tommy Hancock, the editor in chief/head honcho of Pro Se, at a con in late November and get the “I want it. Give it to me by April 15th.”)

The project started as a short story called “The Witch Hunter,” which is about to be published in John Hartness’s Big Bad 2 anthology by Dark Oak Press. More on that later. (Yes, it’s the one I performed at DragonCon.) I always knew it would turn into a series about Michael, a witch hunter, but I didn’t know how it would all work out.

Status: 1, 300 words complete as of yesterday. I’m a pantser, which is good and bad. The good: I get to dive right in and just start writing. The bad: sometimes I have to stop a bit and do some brainstorming. Basically, I need my “Ah ha! Moment” where I figure out the main conflict of the story and can start writing with reckless abandon…

(I, um, don’t have my “Ah Ha! Moment” yet. Today was about finding it.)

Goal: After skimming pulp novellas (I’ve never written pulp, but I’m told my writing naturally leans toward it. Won’t this just be an adventure?), I have decided I’m looking at 13 to 14 chapters of about 2,300 words each. Using a 3 act format, I know that the introduction to my story is 3 chapters. The inciting incident will take place around chapter four.

I need this information for pacing purposes. I’ve never written a novella and I don’t know how it is paced. I’ve got a deadline, so I don’t want to fool around with timing. I have thee short chapters of non-stop action to introduce my character and prove to the audience that he is going to save the world in 6,900 words. And all I have is a character with a backstory, the main villain for the series, and a setting: New Orleans.

More stupid math: my rough drafts are rough. Really rough. Basically, my writing will expand by 1/3 between the first and final drafts. (I write over my maximum word count on the second draft and then I tighten and cut in the 3rd. This means I have to write 1,500 words per chapter in my first draft if I want a final draft of 30,000 total. (I worked all this out yesterday.)

Again, this little diary is just something I’m trying to post to let everyone know what I’m doing. I don’t want to give too much away, but I also want to keep everyone excited about projects coming up, so I will give a few hints throughout the time I do this.

Premise: A long long time ago, in a year that I still don’t have a clue about (I’m thinking the dark ages), a group of powerful witches decided they would cast a spell that would give them complete immortality. I still don’t know the number of witches, which is a problem because the number of witches determines the number of stories I have to write. I’m working with either 7, 10, or 13. (Obviously such a spell would be dark and evil and would require unspeakable acts.) These witches are the ones responsible for all the fairy tales we have from around the world. They have survived the ages and are still at work in the modern age. The only way they can be killed is if one of those who has immortality disavows all magic and kills them. (Technically this is a good thing since this small group has commuted horrific capital crimes for ages.)

Part of the goal with the series is to focus on the fairy tale witches and to steer clear of anything remotely modern or real-life. I’d rather create a fake world of good verses evil so as not to offend anyone. My main villainous is the queen from Snow White, so I figure I’m safe there. (I’m still toying with linking her to Lady Bathory.)

Enter my character: Michael Lodestone.

His name: Michael, after Michael the arch-angel (because sometimes you just have to name a character quickly when you promise John Harntness you will give home a complete short story in a week). Lodestone: a last name he chose because Lodestone has anti-magical properties. Along with iron. I will work out the chemistry later.

The pulp series: Mr. Lodestone gets to hunt these 6, 9, or 12 witches… (This is what pantsing looks like. I’m a full chapter in, and I don’t even know how many people he’s fighting.)

Now that you are up to speed, here’s what I did today:

Goal: 1,500 words written.
Reality: got caught up with necessary brainstorming.

I needed to know what the bad guys would be doing, and Grimm’s fairy tales and other tales make the villains quite flat. Like, seriously, why does the witch from Hansel and Gretel eat children? Who eats children?!?! (Looks like there was a famine in Germany a while back, btw, which gives a bit more explanation.) I needed to figure out the motivations of my bad guys, so I decided to make a list of real, modern day villains. No I will not divulge my list.

Bingo! I don’t have my “Ah Ha!Moment” yet, but I have the basic premise of at least 7 novellas entered into a nice Excel Spreadsheet.

And I know the first bad guy Mr. Lodestone is hunting.

Note: tonight’s goal was cut short because I fell asleep on the couch while brainstorming… (Never brainstorm in a horizontal position after 9:00pm.) That’s why I’m posting this after 3:00am.

Tomorrow’s goal: tomorrow is a work day, so if I get 3 hours of “office time” in I will be lucky. I’m going to hope to write 1,500 words and be done with the rough chapter 2. I also need to figure out who Michael’s friends are. I know there is a girl and probably a guy. One of them is a computer hacker. One of them can fight. One of them might have only one leg… (I don’t know we’re that came up, but I can’t shake it.)

I might even have my “ah ha moment”!

Toodles!

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Video: M. B. Weston Interviews D. Alan Lewis – The Lightning Bolts of Zeus

zeusxlgI was able to sit down for a short interview with D. Alan Lewis and chat with him about his new steampunk adventure, The Lightning Bolts of Zeus!  

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Video: M. B. Weston & Other Authors Present “Retro Radio”

Join with M. B. Weston, other Dark Oak authors, the Expedition Unknown team, and a few other crazy people as they perform a hilarious cold read of an early radio drama at one of the Alabama Phoenix Festival‘s evening panels. Each person was given a script they had never seen before and assigned a part. The script was from a 1950’s radio show called Zero Hour, and it was modeled after some of Ray Bradbury’s short stories. Just a warning: it’s at a convention after dark, and words don’t have the same meanings now as they did in the 50’s. (This would probably be rated PG or PG-13 for some adult content.)

Unfortunately for those involved, someone had a video camera…

Retro Radio: 2014

Recorded in front of a live audience at the Alabama Phoenix Festival 2014

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Tonight’s Final Cut in Movies Radio Show – The Best Movie Spoofs

Join me tonight at 8:00 EST for tonight’s Final Cut in Movies Radio Show. I’m bringing in Dark Oak Press & Media‘s managing editor, Allan Gilbreath, and we’ll be discussing the our favorite movie spoofs, including, but not limited to:

  • Mel Brooks (Blazing Saddles, Young Frankenstein, Space Balls, Men in Tights)
  • Galaxy Quest
  • Monty Python
  • Austin Powers
  • the Scary Movie franchise
  • Spinal Tap

And non-spoof spoofs such as the The Fifth Element and the Princess Bride.

They will also talk a bit about making Attack of the Killer Beignets and its mockumentary and how it became an Indiana Jones spoof…

Listen Live at 8:00pm EST at TMVcafe.com!

Do you have M. B. Weston’s Elysian Chronicles on your Kindle yet? Get them now for only $2.99–less than the cost of a Starbucks Latte! (Click here for A Prophecy Forgotten on Kindle and Out of the Shadows on Kindle.)

Be sure to check out M. B. Weston’s YouTube Channel (YouTube.com/TheMBWeston)!

Fantasy, steampunk, and paranormal novelist M. B. Weston is the author of The Elysian Chronicles, a fantasy series about guardian angel warfare and treason. Weston is also the hose of The Final Cut In Movies radio show that airs on TMV Cafe Monday nights at 8:00 EST. For more information on M. B. Weston, visit www.mbweston.com. To receive notification of M. B. Weston’s book releases click here to subscribe to Dark Oak Press & Media’s e-newsletter.

Click here for a full listing of M. B. Weston’s published books, and be sure to check out her ever-growing list of published short stories here.

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Video: M. B. Weston Interviews J. L. Mulvihill – The Lost Daughter of Easa

easalgI was able to sit down with author J. L. Mulvihill and discuss her young adult fantasy novel, The Lost Daughter of Easa, a story about a young girl who falls through a portal into another world and wakes up with no memory of who she is.

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M. B. Weston in a *Mock* Short Film, Attack of the Killer Beignets! (…and its mocumentary.)

In case you missed in on the Dark Oak Press & Media Blog, some of the Dark Oak authors got access to a video camera at a convention and created a really, really bad Indiana Jones spoof short film called, Attack of the Killer Beignets. Kimberly Richardson and Andrea Judy created the concept, and M. B. Weston and Tommy Hancock starred in it. It’s 4:25 of your life you will never get back, but it’s worth it for the complete hilarity and utter silliness. And what’s a short film without a mockumentary about it’s making? M. B. Weston did the interviews, and if you see her crack up, blame Kimberly Richardson, who was making faces at her behind the camera the whole time.

Attack of the Killer Beignets: The Not-So-Acclaimed Short Film

Staring: M. B. Weston & Tommy Hancock.
Directed by Kimberly Richardson & Andrea Judy.
Crew: Allan Gilbreath, Sean Taylor, Charis Taylor.

The Attack of the Killer Beignets Mockumentary

Staring: M. B. Weston & Tommy Hancock, Kimberly Richardson, Andrea Judy, Allan Gilbreath, Sean Taylor, & Charis Taylor.

Part 1

Part 2

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Video: M. B. Weston Interviews D. Alan Lewis – Blood in Snowflake Garden

Snowflake GardenI got a chance to interview  D. Alan Lewis about his novel, Blood in Snowflake Garden, a murder mystery that takes place at the North Pole in Santa’s City. See the interview below:

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Video: M. B. Weston Interviews Alexander S. Brown For Dark Oak Press

Capes & ClockworkI was able to sit down and do a short interview with horror author, Alexander S. Brown, about his new steampunk short story, “Indestructible.” The story is one of many in the steampunk superhero anthology Capes and Clockwork, which was edited by D. Alan Lewis. See the interview below:

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Sample Sunday: Read a bit of an Elysian Chronicles short story, “The Cherubian, The Lindworm & the Portal”

THunder - LargeThough this story has been out for over a year, I haven’t really publicized it the way I should have. This is an Elysian Chronicles story takes place before A Prophecy Forgotten. Its a story about Davian and Eric before they were officers, and its the first military battle that sets Davian apart as a legendary warrior.

Davian and his RSO (special ops) unit are trying to save a small military outpost from mornacht attack when they soon discover they are being tracked by a lindworm–a dragon that spits sound waves instead of fire–that wants to destroy the outpost as well.

The short story is in Thunder on the Battlefield: Sorcery, edited by James R. Tuck.

You can read the beginning of the story here. Today I wanted to include a part with a bit more action, however:

*****

Davian arrived at the wall next to Eric and shot, providing cover fire for three soldiers making their way up the side of mountain. It did no good. One by one the soldiers fell. Mornachts converged on them, breaking their wings and stabbing them with spears.

He took aim in a rage.

“Conserve your arrows!” [Captain] Thorne’s eyes flashed with determination to survive.

Davian lowered the bow and eyed the captain. Something besides their predicament worried Thorne.

Thorne motioned for Davian to join him. “You rigged the trebuchet?”

“Yes sir.”

“Good. We have a decoy. Kieran! Where’s the runt?”

Kieran popped next to them. “Here sir?”

Thorne pointed to the trebuchet. “Can you see Davian’s rigging?”

Kieran squinted. “Yes sir.”

Thorne took Kieran by the shoulders and pointed him in the direction of a rock that would give him cover. “I need you to get up there and hit it with one of those crystal-tipped arrows—the new ones that will generate a spark.”

The young archer saluted and hopped on the rock.

“Quickly, Kieran,” said Thorne. “This isn’t a drill. Don’t take hours to set up.”

Kieran lay flat to conceal himself from the mornachts. “It’s all in the wind, sir. If I—”

“Just do it, runt.”

While Kieran took aim, Thorne knelt next to Dane’s body. He reached around the lieutenant’s neck and pulled a clear crystal attached to a chain out from under his breastplate. He tossed it to Davian. “You’re next in command.”

“Yes sir.” The words stuck in his throat. He stared at the thumb-sized crystal in his hand. It was a command crystal—the sign of an officer. While he had always dreamed of such a promotion, he knew this was temporary. He also felt unprepared. His knowledge consisted of distances, timing, explosives, and killing—not leading or strategy. He swallowed and hung the crystal around his neck, hiding it in his breastplate. He took his bow and returned to the wall next to Eric, sure the color had drained from his face.

Eric flashed a sarcastic snarl at him. “Just remember, if we get caught, they’ll be interrogating you first.”

“How many do we have out there?” Thorne asked.

No one replied. Eric elbowed Davian in the side.

Davian’s thoughts raced. “We have ten in here.” He said it out loud, fearing silence might frustrate the captain. “Lieutenant Dane and Zedric are down. Those three out there are down. Ten alive. Five down. That’s fifteen unaccounted for.”

Thorne’s already stern face turned severe. He knocked on the rock concealing Kieran. “Sooner rather than later, runt!”

Kieran remained quiet. Davian knew he was concentrating on the swirling wind, waiting for the best time to release the arrow.

A thin black shape streaked through the air with the sharp TWANG! of a released bowstring.

Kieran’s arrow struck the center of the explosive. A boom thundered across the battlefield. The counterweight fell, crashing to the ground, crushing four mornachts under it.

Kieran dropped next to Davian and Eric, looking pleased with himself.

“Rub some more dirt on that breastplate, runt,” said Eric. “It’s still too shiny.”

Kieran grinned.

Six cherubians still trapped in battle seized the opportunity to escape into the air. Arrows screamed after them, plucking all but one out of the sky before they could reach safety. Their bodies careened to the ground and crashed against the rocks.

“Ten down,” said Davian grimly. “Nine unaccounted for.”

“Let’s hope the others make it,” said Thorne.

The ground quaked again. Thorne, who never showed fear, cast a worried look at the woods.

“Something’s out there, sir,” said Davian.

“You’ve noticed too, then.” The captain remained silent for a moment. “We need to get to that tower.”

A gust of wind swirled, knocking them, and the mornachts who approached, on their backs.

Davian pushed himself up, dazed. He had never encountered wind currents like these.

“Look out!” Eric grabbed him from behind and pulled him back. A cherubian fell from the sky and crashed where Davian had been sitting.

The soldiers in the alcove stared at the soldier’s contorted body in horror. His wings were still intact and unbroken. Few cherubians ever lost control during flight.

“No one shot him,” said Kieran. “How did he fall?”

“His ears are bleeding,” said another.

The captain pulled Davian aside. “If anything happens to me, you’re in command. Take my pack. Our orders are in there.”

Davian raised his eyebrows. “I thought our orders were to protect the tower until Salla’s forces arrived.”

Thorne lowered his voice. “The tower is guarding an uncharted portal.”

Davian swallowed hard.

Magnetic fields that created potential portals linking their dimension of Heaven’s Realm to Earth filled the Southern Front. The mornachts hated humans and wanted control of anything that made access to Earth easier. Cherubians, charged with guarding humans, needed to protect any portal they could find.

“That explains why this outpost is in such a horrible location.” Questions filled Davian’s mind, and he wondered how much he dared ask. “Why is this portal uncharted?”

“It’s guarding something more important than a simple passage to Earth. Whatever happens, we can’t let the scabs take that portal. We will destroy it if we have to. Do you understand?”

“Yes sir.” He stared hard at the captain, trying to figure out what he had left out. “What’s in the forest, sir?”

“Scabs aren’t the only creatures in this dimension who want to return to earth. But if we reach the tower, it won’t matter.”

Before he could continue, a swarm of mornachts rushed up the rocks toward them from each side of the valley. Thorne pointed at four of the nearest soldiers. “You four are with me. Davian, take the others. Keep the scabs out of our back door!”

Davian stood in front of men who were still his peers. “Let’s take them.” It sounded silly and uncommanding, but he didn’t know what else to say.

Action, he decided, would be more powerful than any more of his words. He pulled out his bow, grasped the rocks above, and heaved himself up. He crouched behind a boulder and began shooting at the mornachts. The others followed his example.

They held the Morvenian forces back.

For a while.

“I’m out!” yelled Eric.

The others had either two or three arrows left. Davian reached in his own quiver.

Empty.

He stored his bow and took out his sword, preparing for the mornachts and wolves headed toward them.

They poured over the rim of the rocks.

He beheaded one and stabbed another, pushing their bodies down the hill to Thorne. “Make them useful!”

Once the bodies started to steam, Thorne and Kieran launched them down the hill at oncoming mornachts. The explosions stopped the onslaught for a precious few seconds.

The mornachts forced Davian and the soldiers with him down the hill until they fought back to back with Thorne.

Davian heard a low growl to his left. Two Morvenian wolves crouched, glaring at him with uncaring eyes that glowed against their black fur. Their hair stood on end, and they bared their blood-stained fangs. They sprang at Davian, their howls splitting the air.

He kicked one to the side, stabbing the other in the chest mid-leap. Davian ducked, pulling his sword out of the beast’s body as it fell to the ground. The other wolf jumped, knocking him to the ground. He rammed his sword hilt into its temple. He thrust the wolf off, stood up, and finished it properly, separating its head from its body with one swing.

Sweat and blood flew through the air as the soldiers around Davian engaged in their own battles. Eric grabbed his shoulder and pointed at some mornachts who were pushing a boulder down the hill directly at them. Davian grasped Thorne’s arm to pull him out of the way. He lost his grip on the captain’s sweaty limbs. Davian fell back and watched the boulder roll past him.

Dirt, moss, and shards of rock burst out around him. He opened his eyes. Kieran, stunned, blinked as he struggled to sit up. Eric stared open-mouthed at Thorne, who didn’t budge.

Davian leapt to his feet and landed next to the captain. His once square jaw had crumpled, and cold, empty eyes stared lifelessly at the sky. Davian closed Thorne’s eyes and crossed his fist over his chest in salute. “Godspeed and safe journey, Captain.”

He peered over the rock. Twenty mornachts swarmed toward them, converging on them from the front and back. The soldiers looked to him, unsure of the next course of action. Of the ten, only six, including himself, were left….

*****

Read more about Davian and more sword and sorcery stories in Thunder on the Battlefield.

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